Summer comes year after year,
Just like your tears my dear,
Your wet eyes to sight I fear,
But unlike summer I can stop your tear.
Not a day passes without me thinking,
If you are happy or melancholic and sulking,
Or if your eyes are closed, winking or blinking,
And I wonder if the tears will ever cease flowing.
I can never stop thinking of those pretty big eyes
River of tears that darken your cheeks like dyes
Every drop for the best pearl it vies,
However hard you try, the hurt it never belies.
That sparkling drop, shaped like a pear,
With my palms, I will rub them clear,
Will my touch bring in you the cheer?
I’ll do anything for a glow in your eyes my dear.
Love you Sweetness
Hoopoe
5 comments:
Thank you my darling, deeply touched. You don't have to apologise, I have areadly forgotten about it, moreover, I was the one hurting you!
Waiting for you Sweetheart, get done with your exams and let's spend some quality time with each other..
Love you Hoopoe...
Actually, I saw this post long ago. But I was waiting for Sweetness to comment first 'cause it was actually written for her, and so it would be better if the first comment came from her.
So, now that she has commented, let me say, its really nice and well written. Sensitive!
:)
Zave, that is really very kind of you! Thank you dear.
well, dats really a beautiful one.....
so its nice dat you ppl r doin dis thing together.....
Also acc. to me dere's an error in 4th line of ur post, it shud b:
"But unlike summer I can't stop your tear."
Can shud b replaced by Can't
hv a luk at it...
by d way thanx fr dropping by at my blog...
cheers :)
Thanks Aspirant!
Well, about the 4th line, the concept is, He can't stop the season, but, he sure can give me all the comfort and assurance and thereby stop my tears!
Also, it was my pleasure reading through your blog.. Hope to read more.
Thank you for visiting me too.
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